Comments for The Monkeywrench Emporium http://monkeywrenchemporium.wordpress.com The poetry, musings, and miscellany of an american Zero Thu, 15 May 2008 20:26:31 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=MU Comment on Cookies Fortune - See the beauty in everything by ybonesy http://monkeywrenchemporium.wordpress.com/2008/04/04/cookies-fortune-see-the-beauty-in-everything/#comment-275 ybonesy Tue, 06 May 2008 18:09:08 +0000 http://monkeywrenchemporium.wordpress.com/?p=127#comment-275 Hi there. Just stopping in. Hey, your name reminds me of a great quote (kind of like a fortune cookie message -- the best ones) about Zero. Here's the post that has it: http://redravine.wordpress.com/2008/01/14/writing-topic-circles/ It's about half-way down the post. Cheers. Hi there. Just stopping in. Hey, your name reminds me of a great quote (kind of like a fortune cookie message — the best ones) about Zero. Here’s the post that has it:

http://redravine.wordpress.com/2008/01/14/writing-topic-circles/

It’s about half-way down the post.

Cheers.

]]> Comment on Haiku by shekhu http://monkeywrenchemporium.wordpress.com/2008/04/15/haiku-23/#comment-213 shekhu Wed, 16 Apr 2008 06:04:00 +0000 http://monkeywrenchemporium.wordpress.com/?p=148#comment-213 Good, liked it! This is what I wrote today, tell me please if it's Baby snores softly Breeze cradles In the branches Good, liked it!
This is what I wrote today, tell me please if it’s

Baby snores softly
Breeze cradles
In the branches

]]> Comment on Haiku - Another for Least Heat Moon by Scot http://monkeywrenchemporium.wordpress.com/2008/04/08/haiku-another-for-least-heat-moon/#comment-193 Scot Wed, 09 Apr 2008 00:11:02 +0000 http://monkeywrenchemporium.wordpress.com/?p=137#comment-193 pack up the van--this one is ready to travel pack up the van–this one is ready to travel

]]> Comment on Poem by zeroanon http://monkeywrenchemporium.wordpress.com/2008/04/08/poem/#comment-188 zeroanon Tue, 08 Apr 2008 22:03:49 +0000 http://monkeywrenchemporium.wordpress.com/?p=135#comment-188 Thanks for the feedback and the suggestion. I do like it better, formatted that way. Z Thanks for the feedback and the suggestion. I do like it better, formatted that way.

Z

]]> Comment on Carrying Your Ghost - Epilogue by Outdoors2 http://monkeywrenchemporium.wordpress.com/2008/03/03/carrying-your-ghost-epilogue/#comment-187 Outdoors2 Tue, 08 Apr 2008 15:32:17 +0000 http://monkeywrenchemporium.wordpress.com/?p=79#comment-187 My prayer then is this, that when I have fallen, when I can carry them no more, that there will be someone there to pick us up, and carry us a little further. Intense thoughtful tribute. I also like your observance of Shadows life with... 'who was just getting back onto his feet when a hit and run driver knocked them out from under him' ~R My prayer then is this, that when I have fallen, when I can carry them no more, that there will be someone there to pick us up, and carry us a little further.

Intense thoughtful tribute.

I also like your observance of Shadows life with…

‘who was just getting back onto his feet when a hit and run driver knocked them out from under him’

~R

]]> Comment on Poem by Outdoors2 http://monkeywrenchemporium.wordpress.com/2008/04/08/poem/#comment-186 Outdoors2 Tue, 08 Apr 2008 15:18:33 +0000 http://monkeywrenchemporium.wordpress.com/?p=135#comment-186 I like it, explains life. I will suggest centering the text to the: 'Middle' to complete your statement...;) I like it, explains life.
I will suggest centering the text to the: ‘Middle’ to complete your statement… ;)

]]> Comment on Tanka by Scot http://monkeywrenchemporium.wordpress.com/2008/04/07/tanka-19/#comment-185 Scot Tue, 08 Apr 2008 10:49:45 +0000 http://monkeywrenchemporium.wordpress.com/?p=134#comment-185 like the canyons of brick and glass--nice like the canyons of brick and glass–nice

]]> Comment on Tanka by candyadderley http://monkeywrenchemporium.wordpress.com/2008/04/07/tanka-18/#comment-174 candyadderley Mon, 07 Apr 2008 12:47:22 +0000 http://monkeywrenchemporium.wordpress.com/?p=132#comment-174 brilliant... very smooth indeed i really enjoyed this poem brilliant…
very smooth indeed
i really enjoyed this poem

]]> Comment on Haiku - Cyberpunk by J http://monkeywrenchemporium.wordpress.com/2008/04/03/haiku-cyberpunk/#comment-163 J Thu, 03 Apr 2008 23:04:16 +0000 http://monkeywrenchemporium.wordpress.com/?p=123#comment-163 Nice. Nice.

]]> Comment on Tanka - For Least Heat Moon by zeroanon http://monkeywrenchemporium.wordpress.com/2008/03/03/tanka-for-least-heat-moon/#comment-125 zeroanon Tue, 25 Mar 2008 11:14:44 +0000 http://monkeywrenchemporium.wordpress.com/?p=81#comment-125 Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Z Thanks for reading, I’m glad you enjoyed it.

Z

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